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There was once a ruthless king, Peter, who, within his kingdom, could take or have whatever he wanted. One day while walking with his seven wives he came across a woman of surpassing beauty. Her name was Olga. She was the Inventors daughter. Everyone in town thought it weird that she enjoyed reading and learning, as she was a woman, but her father was always encouraging her to pursue what makes her happy.One day the king saw her incredible beauty and declared she must be his. Unwanted she refused, but she was forced into marrying him. She was his prisoner. The king wished to make beautiful babies with her. So she got pregnant. She birthed the child, but she could not bear to hold the child of this monster in her hands, so she brought it to the nearby river and let it drift away. This occurred seven times. The river The king was furious. All he wanted was to have a beautiful son to be the heir to his throne, but every time he tries she would carry them off to the river. The 8th ti

Vyasa and Ganesha  Author: John Macfie -Chedi dropped his semen into a river -a fish got pregnant and had two kids, Satyavati and Yamuna King Shantanu and Ganga  Author: Donald Mackenzie -Shantanu married Ganga -Ganga tossed their children in the Ganges so there celestial spirits could be free -Shantanu gets mad -Ganag leaves him -brings him noble son, Devavrata King Shantanu and Satyavati -Shantanu wanted Satyavati, fish girl -Her father wanted her son to be heir to the throne -Shantanu said no because it was for Devavrata Devavrata's Vow -He said he would not be king, marry, or have kids -This was so his father could marry Satyavati Bhishma at the Swayamvara -Bhishma needed to find his brother a wife -He is a great archer Amba -Amba is not to be married and is sad -Gains the power to destroy Bhishma Dhritarashtra and Pandu -The two sons of Ambika and Ambalika -father was Vyasa -D was blind and Pandu was pale Kunti and her Son -Kunti gave birth to

Sita Sings the Blues  Author: Nina Paley Sita went back home with Rama. Even though she went through a trial by fire for Rama, the people did not see this therefore they were unconvinced of her purity. Due to this, they questioned Rama's pride, how he could take back a woman who was with another other than himself. After this Rama booted Sita out the door into banishment. I enjoyed how the narration portrayed the cruelty that Rama showed Sita upon her return. That he literally kicked her out. I also enjoyed how the narrators went into how Sita must have her own internal problems, for always staying loyal to a man that started to treat her so poorly. Not that she was physically abused in any way, but it could be seen from a certain perspective as a domestic abuse case were the victim keeps coming back to her abuser. Even after she had his children she proved herself once more to this man, although this time she return to mother earth. Rama Seeing Sita's Purity for the Last

Sita Sings the Blues  Author: Nina Paley This story was a retelling of the Ramayana through a video. I enjoyed the use of the three narrators arguing with each other and coming to conclusions as to what happened. This helped keep my attention throughout the entirety of the story, although I did not enjoy the addition of a separate story that showed the tale between a modern couple, who's relationship was similar to that of Sita and Rama. Sita and Rama I did find it interesting how this adaption of the Ramayana decided to take out Lakshmana from the group that went out into exile. I did the same when creating a story based off of the Ramayana stories, as I thought Lakshmana was an unessential character to the story. Although the music portions of the story were cool, I thought it took away from the plot of the story. For someone who has has not read the Ramayana before this leaves out some of the story.

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Link to my Portfolio: Sita Story There was a family, the Cage's, who collected rare items of history. There collection raked up a net worth of $100 million, but in an unfortunate happening their family got in trouble with the Rare Artifact of Value Acquirers, RAVA for short. Being Jealous of the Cage's large collection they created false documents claiming that one of the Cage's artifacts was theirs. This particular artifact was of high importance, the most beautiful painting of a woman from ancient Indian culture, Sita. RAVA placed its claim and obtained Sita without the Cage's even knowing what happened. This particular painting was dear to one of the thirteen children, Nicolas, as he was tasked with caring for the art collection. A Picture of Nicolas Furious with the painting being unjustly stolen from him he set out to obtain it back. As he was leaving, one of his brothers, Riley, saw him and said he would not let him leave on this adventure alone. They unfor

The Bridge  Author: Donald A. Mackenzie -Rama asked ocean god for help -he didn't answer so Rama shot celestial weapons at the ocean until they responded -said they could not help due to ancient law, but to ask Nala, the vanar chief, for help -Nala built a great bridge for Rama Rama Attacks  Author: Sister Nivedita -Rama sieges Lanka -Everyone tells Ravana to surrender Sita, but he is to stubborn -He tries to trick Sita with a false Rama head and bow -they disappear when Ravana is called to battle Indrajit -son of Ravana -Beat down Rama and lakshmana -the monkeys were terrified of the rakshasa'a fighting method -Then Garuda came with a magical herb to revive Rama and his brother -they began to again seize the gates of Lanka Kumbhakarna  Author: Donald A. Mackenzie -The greatest of demons, who once defeated Indra, put to sleep for 6 months and awoke for 1 day eat -He devoured many monkeys, beat Hanuman and seized Sugriva -Rama shot his head off with an arro

Sugriva and Hanuman  Author: Geraldine Hodgson -Hanuman took the form of a begger to approach the brothers -asks them what they are doing in the lake country -they respond after he reveals himself to be the messenger of Surgiva -they want to be placed under his protection -Sugriva needs their help as well Sugriva's Story -Sugriva was told by brother Vila to guard a hole while he chased something in it -After one year and seeing blood come out and not hearing his brother he thought he was dead -Sugriva then blocked the hole as to not let the creature out -vila was alive and got out and exciled Sugriva and took away his wife for not believing his story -Rama tells Sugriva to challenge Vila in battle Sugriva and Vali  Author: Romesh Dutt -Sugriva challenges Vali -Tara Vali's wife warns him that Rama might be allied with him -Sugriva does not care and accepts the battle Vali's Death -Vali wreck Sugriva -Rama steps in and shoots Vila killing him King Sugri

Be a Mirror This article is useful as it lists out examples as to how each of the 5 useful qualities within feedback is presented. I always find that being specific when talking to people can show you are genuinely interested in their life, but I never thought this could be utilized when giving feedback. Another important quality is to not tell them they are missing something as that does not allow growth because they did not put any effort into something they did not even think of. The most interesting point in this article was to take oneself out of the feedback. Everyone enjoys talking about themselves, but in the case where you are giving feedback it's best to not say why I think something because it takes away from their growth. Difference Between Praise and Feedback Praise and Personhood Here the article says not to use positive reinforcement as this could make your child feel unworthy if they do not do what was being reinforced. In my opinion this is dumb. The very poin

Ancient weapons in India. list of weapons Ancient Indian Weapons -a list with details pertaining to each weapon, great resource Each episode in my story will pertain to tracking down a single destructive weapon, it will of course feature The Doctor. The three weapons will be the Brahmastra , Brahmashirsha astra , Bramanda astra . These are all weapons of Brahma, thus he will be used to help track them down. episode 1 The doctor is tasked with collecting celestial weapons left on earth from ancient times. This is to destroy them due to their destructive nature. His first objective is to collect all the Brahma based weapons. The first of which being the Brahmastra. Using the knowledge and details of the fight between Ravana and Rama, and that Lanka is modern day Sri Lanka. He goes searching there for it. episode 2 After he finds the first weapon he learns of another weapon, one that is the evolution of the Brahmastra, the  Brahmashirsha astra . He uses the knowledge of the

For as long as time has gone on there has always been time lords, those who try to control time, but after the great time wars few remained. One of whom was the renowned Doctor. He has came to be known as the keeper of time and even a great warrior, but back in ancient times some called him a god. After a loss whilst fighting the dialects, the doctor regenerated, but this time as a man, the avatar of Vishnu himself. He goes by Rama, and keeps his true identity a secret. The reason for this is to help rid the earth of the monstrous demons that haunt it. He always kept his companion by his side as to not be too lonely on his journey throughout the world. He did not meet her until he was traveling and saw her, Sita daughter of Janaka, at that instant he could see into her soul, he saw beauty, elegance, but most importantly loyalty. In order to prove to her father that he is worthy of having Sita as a companion he must string a celestial bow, that no man could string before him. It is whee